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Topic
PositioningMessaging
Type
Social PostAdvertisement
Here’s another polarizing example from the past week.
Des Traynor, founder of Intercom, shared their new billboard ad.
Some people loved it. Many did not.
From Des’s perspective:
“just say the thing you want to say, and don’t dilute it or confuse it with ‘copy’ to try to make it catchy”.
I agree with that statement and appreciate the approach, but this ad still feels unclear.
What I think would improve it:
- Be clearer about WHO intercom is for.
- Be clearer about what a “complete” CS platform is and why someone should care.
- Instead of being the leader in AI, tell me why you’re better.
- Make it more about the customer.
In contrast, I actually think the H2 on their website is much clearer:
“The only solution that combines an AI chatbot, help desk, and proactive support — so you can keep costs low, support teams happy, and customers satisfied.”
Takeaway: Clear beats clever. But clarity is harder than many people think.